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My opinion: I don’t know.

Reason:

It’ll be fine to have a cell phone when their houses are far away or it is not a smart phone. I think if the phone is a smart phone or not doesn’t matter. A cell phone is for calling and giving text messages so I think it doesn’t matter until you can’t call with it.

But some people say that it is bad for kids because of radiation. And radiation causes terrible diseases. On the news, this often shows up.

Even if it is harmful, It’s not bad for kids to have cell phones just in case for a emergency. You’ll find it hard to call for help if you don’t have cell phones. If the parents are worried about games, parents will have to make children not do games .

Therefore, I Think I don’t know whether it is good or bad.

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                                        <Do Kids Need Their Own Cell Phone?>

 Some people think that kids don't need their own cell phones because they just play games with it. However, unlike these people, I think kids need their own cell phone.

 The first reason why I think kids need their own cell phone is because his/her family needs to know their kid's information if they are far away from the kid:where they are, what happened to them... All families love their children, so if their kids have no cell phone so they can't get informatiobn of their kids, they will probably get nervous and stuffy.

 Another reason why I think kids should have their own cell phone is because to release their stess. These days, smart phones are commonly used.They have lots of games. Normal phones also have games, but not fun then smart phones. Also, children have lots of homework to do these days. So, they will have lots of stress. So, I think they can sometimes do games and release stress. But, if they do too much games, I will change their phones to normal phones.

 This was why I think kids should have their own cell phones.

Sam 초2남(이게 내 아이디)

my opinion:no.

because if KIDS have cell phones, they promise to not game.

but they do games when their moms do not see them.

and smart phones can be worse.

these new things are not invented for game.

and your eyes get bad if you spend a lot a time because of game.

kids only need phones to talk and text

and even some grown ups are doing games.

and now my eyes are really bad.

I don't have many ideas now.

bye!

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Ryan 초4 남

I think kids do not need their own cell phones. 

Do kids need their own cell phones?

I think they need them very much.

Quite a few people in the world use cell phones.

Cell phones are small machines that

you use to call other people in other places.

Unlike other phones, you can call other people

when and anywhere. Cell phones are also

small, so you can hold it easily.

There are also smart phones that gives

you other help besides calling.

You can text, take pictures, and even

play games with smart phones.

Most children play games with the phones.

I also play games with my cell phone.

Among popular games these days

are Cookie Run and Geometry Dash.

You can use cell phones as other

convenient things in the world. You can

draw pictures in phones and send it

instead of really drawing pictures on

white paper. And cell phones

are particularly important to children

because they use their phones much

than adults do.