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처음 쓰는 영어일기라 많이 부족하고 어설프지만 혼자 힘으로 쓴 일기라 이 기회에 첨삭지도 받는게 좋을 것 같아서 올립니다. 고칠 부분이 많아서 힘드시겠지만 부탁드립니다.
하루종일 블럭 가지고 상상놀이 하다가 흥분이 가시지 않은 상태에서 쓴 일기라 문장들이 좀 장황합니다.^^;;
Friday, Jan 5, 2007
it was windy.
<Mini Park is small but fun>
I made a mini park with some of the blocks.
Inside the Mini Park, there's a rock and roll ride, and a spiny ride, and a gost rollr coster, and a new-cabelcar.
Well, the rock and roll ride works with a rock, when the rock goes down, the ride goes up.
The spiny ride spins when I get on, and I get dizzy.
The gost roller coster is very fast and gostly spooky, so that's why, and last is the new cabelcar.
The new-cabelcar is looking like a top bunk, beacause the 1floor seat has a 2floor seat above it,
and it dosn't go on a string, it goses on tracks!
The park is so small that small dummy people can go in.
When I playd with park, I felt that I was rideing.
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