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히플러님의 첨삭에 힘입어 또 올려봅니다.
저희 아들은 아직은 영어일기에 거부감을 가지고 있기에 다양한 방법으로 영어쓰기에 접근하고 있습니다.
오늘은 동화책을 읽어보고 나름대로 재구성해보기였습니다.
It's santas home.
santas home was busy.
But wheres santa?
santa was wakeing up.
He is finding his red suit.
he looks everwhere.
santa worry himself.
santa goes to loft.
"how does it look like." santa says.
"No. No." children says.
santa wears everything.
But children says
"No. No. That's not santa."
So santa goes to loft again.
"Now I'll go" santa says.
"No. No. You cant go out in under wear." children says.
"santa cant find his red suit" children says to Mrs.
"I have a new red suit" mrs. says.
"Im gonna go whin you."
this will gonna be fun.
[영어일기]고학년다운 의젓함, 혜원이일기 첨삭지도 
