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Date : January 10

Weather : It was chilly and windy.

Tittle : end of star wars

At 9 O'clock tonight, I saw a movie called Star Wars, but it's the last movie!

It's when all the planets get peace.

Loouk got to the death's star. He made Baither back to his kindself, Anikan.

He was Loouk's father.

He dies but he turns to a Jedi and remains to talk with Loouk.

I was happy that they got peace.

Everyone dandced like crazy !

I hope there were no more fights anymore !

I hope there is another starwars movie.

1학년 남자아이입니다.

코엑스에서 열리는 스타워즈전에 가기위해서..

스타워즈 시리지를 오늘에서야 마지막회까지 봤네요.

이제 날잡아 스타워즈전에 갈 일만 남았네요.

아직도 시제의 일치는 어려운 개념인듯합니다.

왔다리~~갔다리~~~

등장인물의 이름도..나름대로 표기고..

노트에는 한페이지 분량인데 옮겨놓으니 짧군요..^^

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Date : January 2

Weather : It was cool and windy.

Tittle : Sleepy

Today was a sleepy day, because of my ski lesson was early.

I woke up at six O'clock, eat breakfast, and rest awhile.

If the ski teacher phone mom, that means the car is here,

but no phoncalls came until 7 O'clock.

So mom and I went out to wait. A friend was wating too.

The car was here in 8:05 clock. I wanted to go to bed.

I got better after doing ski.

After ski I went to Taekwondo at 4:40.

I was sleepy.

I think I'll drift to sleep soon.

모처럼 큰맘먹고 보내는 스키캠프..

첫 시간을 보내고 아이가 생각한게..피곤함이라니..쯧쯧..

아마도 오전 스키 오후 국기원부 2시간...무리한 일정이었을까요?

더군다나...선생님이 시간도 안지켜주셔서..아마도 힘이들었나보군요.

I'll drift to sleep...

데체 어떤 표현을 쓰고 싶었던 걸까요?

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Date : January 11

Weather : It was so cold so my teeth chattered.

Tittle : Lokko

Tonight, I got the block called Lokko.

I wanted that the first time of Orda Lesson.

I thanked my mother and did my homework.

then I learnt with my mother about cubes.

There has to be 1 face on the bottom, 1 face on the top, and 4 faces on the side.

This has to be right so it is a cube.

Then we made a space restrant. It got a cool antana.

It took a long time to make it.

That's why my back is now hurt.

The space restrant had feet.

On the feet was a booster.

It can stay on anywhere.

There are 5 entrence. There are 5 doors.

The antana sometimes shoot something that's dangerous.

Other times, maybe I'll maje things out of Lokko again.

이미지가 3개 밖에 안올라가네요.

방학기간 동안 일기 쓰는데로 새로운 계시물로 계속 올려도 되는건가요?

엄마가 지적하는것 보다 선생님이 해주신 첨삭지도가 많은 도움이 될듯해서...

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