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: 빨강머리앤님의 글입니다.
6 minute english 3번째 참여지만...
그리고 하루에 몰아서 하지만...ㅋㅋㅋ 그래도 Ryan에게 조금씩 변화가 있는것 같아
너무너무 좋아용...^ㅡ^
예전에는 글쓰기를 무지 싫어했거든요..
지금도 좋아하는 건 아니지만... 그래도 싫다고하지는 않네요~~ ㅋㅋ
방금전에 녹음했는데요.... 처음으로 2번만 녹음했네요..
한번만 녹음해도 되었는데..... 너무 아쉬워서 2번 녹음했어용...^^
저는 아무런 준비없이 해서 버벅버벅...ㅋㅋ
writing은 아이들이 작성한거 제가 타이핑을....
아이들이 올릴땐 확인을 못하고 올렸었는데..
타이핑하면서 읽으니... 이번주제는 아이들이 좋아할만한 주제라 글쓰기가 좀 쉽지 않을까 했는데.. 근거가 조금 약하네요..... 그래도 하기싫다는 말 없이 해준 아이들에게 고마워요~~
Sam's
The main idea is : Are computers bad?
The supporting idea is :
When you game or see a video on a computer your eyes get very dry.
But you don't blink because you might die in the game or miss a second of the video.
That's the second way, besides, electro-magnetic waves affect your eyes negatively.
The second supporting idea is that they kill your ability to think.
A kid solved 10 math problems (10/10).
The kid watched a video on a computer then the kid only solved 8 math problems(8/10).
See! See! That! is a way to kill your brain cells! Ha! Proved it!
And the third supporting idea is that moms get mad when their kids play on the computer for a long time. So moms nag on you and you get stressed out and play on the computer again.
Nag again, stress again!
Computer again, nag again, stress again, computer again........
Understand? The cycle goes on.
Conclusion : Computers are bad for you!!!!
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Ryan's
Hello, I'm Ryan.
I will talk about computers in this paper.
I think computer games have both advantages and disadvantages.
But I will talk about the advantages of it.
First, it is good for concentration skills.
There was some experiment in the U.S.A.
And teh man who played 'Super Mario Brothers' 30 min everyday for one month had better concentraion than others.
So if you play games, you can have better concentration.
And you can study better than others.
It is ironic that if you play games, then you get better studying results, but moms say not to play games because you have to study.
Second, CPU can give you information.
It is called the ocean of information.
You can get many information on the internet.
I know that it has bad information too but it is worth it.
(뒤에 이야기를 해주겠다며 소설을 쓰는데.. 장난치듯 엉뚱한 이야기만 늘어놔서.. 여기까지만..)
