초5 Ryan & 초3 Sam

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2015-01-23

: 빨강머리앤님의 글입니다.

이번것을 좀 정성껏 해보자... 약속했는데...

올려주신 첫날 한번 읽고 듣고... 아이들 롸이팅하고...

오늘 부랴부랴 아침에 녹음했네요... 많이 듣고 녹음해야하는데....

생각보다 꾸준히 듣는게 쉽지 않아요..

요놈들이 차분한 녀석들이 아니라... 그리고 집안에 꼬맹이가 방해를 하는지라...

오늘 녹음에 우여곡절이 참 많았답니다..

아침에 일찍 일어나서 녹음하기로 했는데..

오늘따라 공쥬님이 너무 일찍 일어나버렸어요...

그래서 제 일터에 아이들 델꼬와서 녹음하고 있는데...

학생들이 일찍 오는 바람에.....

몇번씩 중단되다보니...

울 아들램들 짜증내고... 그 짜증내는 모습에 저까지 폭발!!!!!!

큰애는 그래도 엄마의 기분을 아니... 나름 최선을 다하려고 하더라구요..

그런데 작은애는 기분파라... 일부러 반항하듯 느리게 읽었다가 빨리 읽었다가...

다른 분들과 아이들의 녹음분을 들으면 자꾸 반성하게 되요!!!

Writing은 큰아들놈은 나름 열심히 쓰려고 하는데.. 표현력이 좀 ....

둘째놈은 문장은 자연스러우나 내용보다는 재미로 장난스럽게 쓰고요..

우선 큰애것만 올리구요..

작은애것은 이따가 자기가 타이핑해서 올린다고하네요~~~

Second Hand Smoking for Children

by Ryan

People shouldn't smoke when children are in the car or near them.

It can kill them because second hand smoking is bad.

It can cause disease.

Now smoking is more expensive, and do you know this?

In other countries smoking is different. They print the picture in the cigarette box of the smoker's dying, but the picture is not on Korea's cigarette boxes.

Smoking has nicotin, tar, and other bad things. They make people addicted.

So the best way is not smoking.

And if you smoked earlier in your life, you can use electric cigarette or work on not smoking.

It can be hard, but keep going forward.

Second hand smoking is worse than smoking.

The smokers have filter in their tobaccos, but second hand smoking doesn't have a filter. So smoking has more disadvantages.

It makes death percent increase.

You can die faster.

In Korea, cigarettes are 4,500. It was 2,500 in 2014.

But it changed because the government knew that it was bad.

Some smokers say that they need their personal space.

But smoke of the cigarette doesn't stay around the space. It moves!!!

So I think smoking has to be illegal for everyone in this earth.

In Korea, there was tobacco when Korea was called Chosun.

The king of Korea, JeongJo liked tobacco smoke pipes.

He said "When I am reading books and sleepy, only tobacco has power. Beause of tobacco, I can sleep deeply,"

But Chosun's professor Eek Lee said "Tobacco makes spirit die, and make people hurt,"

And people of Chosun knew people can be addicted.

It is the worst thing in the whole world.

So don't smoke!!! It's bad for all!!!

Christoper Columbus found tobacco leaf,

And out of his honeroble works, it is the worst!!!

smoking is bad for you

-THE 초3

First reason:(about no smoking)yes. Now you know kids want to copy adults. If adults smoke, kid will think that smoking is cool and want to smoke. And if they smoke, they will get addicted and want to smoke more.

Second reason: smoking is expensive. You smoke, get addicted, buy more tobacco, and you have no money.

You know tobacco got expensive, don't you?(I thought this because I think who reads this is over 10)

If you buy tobacco much, you'll have no spare money.

Third reason: Look what I heard from here and there;

My teacher, christina smoked once, but she never smoked after that time. She said it was awful.

Now you guessed what my opinion is.

NEVER.SMOKE

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