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Civill War on Sunday

Jack and Annie saw the saw a swirl of light.

They thought the magic tree house was back.

Their mom said come back when if it starts to rain.

They ran to the tree house.There was her note.It said the Camelot was in trouble,to save the

Kingdom they have to find four special kinds of writings.

First they have to find something to follow.

They looked at books title.The title was "The Civil War".They hate Wars.but they made a wish and

went to battle field.It was very hot.

Annie went to help people.Jack followed.They help him walked.

They walked with soldier into the camp.Outside one tent,women wearing dark dresses gave

food and water to hurted soldiers.

Jack and Annie went to one nurse and said they are volunteer nurse.

She said give food and water to soldiers in the camp.and she said follow the writing on the paper.

Jack receiverd they found something to follow.and he said they can go back.

But Annie said they have to help soldiers.Annie went into the tent.

He had no choice.so he followed in.Jack gave soldiers to water.Annie gave foods.

They went to next tent.when Jack give them water,one man talked with him.

He talked about his family.his family was all slaves.everyone solded.

He ran 30mile to tell the Union soldiers that comfedrates were going to attack.

When they ended talking.they went out the tent and saw Clara Barton the famous nurse.

They came to her and said they want help.she said went up the wagon.

They help the hurted people to went in the wagon.

They help John the drummer boy who hada heat stroke.they try to stop John who try yo help the War.

But he said soldiers need him.so they let go him.

Crala Barton said it is the time that Jack and Annie have to go.

They cant's give up,but she said do not forget the ones who love you.

When they heard this,they ran back to tree house.they heard the songs.

Then they made a wish and went to frog creek.It starts raining .

They ran to their house.In the house, they asked did anyone fight in the Civil War.

Their dad said John the drumer boy.when the war finished,he do a school teacher.

It was a great news.

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