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  • 2012-10-04 21:53
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  • 2012-10-06 21:00
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  • 2012-10-03 21:26
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  • 2012-10-06 21:05
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  • 2012-09-25 16:46
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  • 2012-10-03 22:10
Çì´Ï´Â ¾ö¸¶Àϵµ Àß µµ¿Íµå¸®°í ¾ö¸¶»ýÀÏ¿¡ ÄÉÀÌÅ©µµ ì±æ ÁÙ ¾Æ´Â ¾ÆÁÖ ÂøÇÑ È¿³à¿´±º¿ä.
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  • 2012-10-06 21:10
Çý´Ï°¡ Áý¾ÈÀϵµ Æò¼Ò ¸¹ÀÌ ÇϳªºÁ¿ä? ÄÉÀÌÅ© »ì Á¤µµÀÇ µ·À» ¸ðÀ¸·Á¸é Á¤¸» ºÎÁö·±ÇØ¾ß ÇÒ °Í °°Àºµ¥ ¸»ÀÔ´Ï´Ù. ^^ ¹Ì¼Ç ±Û Àç¹Õ°Ô Àß ºÃ¾î¿ä.^^
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  • 2012-09-24 15:27
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  • 2012-09-24 20:49
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  • 2012-09-25 00:46
What a beautiful handwriting!
I wish mine was just as good as your's.
I can see that you earned your allowence by doing chores.
What a nice way to earn money.
You can earn money while you are helping your parents.
We call this killing two birds with one stone,right?
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  • 2012-10-03 22:18
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  • 2012-09-24 10:10
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  • 2012-09-24 20:31
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  • 2012-09-25 00:50
I can see that you put a lot of effort on vocabularies!
By learning words through book I believe one day ypu will be the king of vocabulary words!
Did you have hard time with the word Monopoly?
I can see that your sentence is bit off the topic.
If I were you I would have written...
Samsung is the monopoly of Korea's celler phone industry.
But nice try. I hope you learn a lot from these missions
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  • 2012-09-24 09:05
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  • 2012-09-24 20:25
·ç½ÃÀÇ »çÃ̵¿»ý°úÀÇ °æÇè ¾ÆÁÖ Àç¹Õ°Ô Àß Àоú¾î¿ä. ^^
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  • 2012-09-25 00:53
I am totally surprised by your writing skills!
Your examples sentences for vocabulary words are perfectly done. (few gramatical mistakes are forgivable)
Anyway if you practice your vocabulary skills every week,
you will easily read higher level books.
So keep going!
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  • 2012-09-24 09:04
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  • 2012-09-24 09:16
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  • 2012-09-24 20:17
ÁÖÇϰ¡ ¾ö¸¶ Èò ¸Ó¸® »Ì¾ÆÁÖ´Â °É·Î 500¿ø, 1000¿ø¾¿ ¹Þ³ª¿ä?
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  • 2012-09-25 01:10
Thank you very much for a detailed picture!
I can see how hard you have to work to earn your own allowance.
For the reading comprehension, it is important to check what you believe is right.
However, it is also necessary to find out if you understood the wrong context.
Since your essay is excellent, maybe next time you can show me how much you developed in reading comprehension questions^^
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  • 2012-09-24 08:39
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grade 5/ Alvin

 

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  • 2012-09-24 09:22
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  • 2012-09-24 20:10
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  • 2012-09-25 01:13
Wow a garage sale!
I remember opening a garage sale of my own when I was about your age.
Even now days I sometimes visit huge flea market in Seoul to earn my own allowance too!
Also I can see that you almost understood most of the vocabulary words. Your sentences are almost perfect in context wise. Good Job!
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  • 2012-09-24 19:51
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  • 2012-09-25 01:16
I'm sorry for your sad news.
I believe you loved your grandfather very much, and hope that he will be always near you.
But don't worry, with today's medical care, I believe your grandfather will recover soon.
Moreover I thank you so much for finishing the work even though a huge tragic happened to you.
Thank you very much dear.
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Lunch Money Part. 2
1. Reading Comprehension

What is Maura's main job with Chunky Comics?
A)Inking the Pictures

Why do Greg and Maura attend the school committee meeting?
B)They saw how many other things were sold at school and wanted to get permission for Chunky Comics to be sold too.

What is one lesson that Greg learned?
D)Sometimes giving can feel just as rewarding as getting.

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2. Vocabulary
[Introduction]Find the meaning of the words below and write one short sentence for each word.

Advertise-to make known to the public, as in a newspaper, or on television.(verb)
¡æToo many companies advertise on magazines, televisions and newspapers.

Produce-1.to show, bring out of offer for examination or consideration. 2.to grow or supply. 3.to give birth 4.to make from materials 5.to cause 6. to prepare in all details and bring before the public(verb)
¡æThis banana was produced in Philippines.

Competition-1.the act of competing. 2.a test of strength, skill, ability, etc. (noun)
¡æThere was a competition between our class and class number 3.

Profit-money gained by business(noun)
¡æI wish I have a lot of profit after garage sale.

Consumer-a person who buys and uses goods and services(noun)
¡æ"I think meat is too expensive" said one consumer and all consumer in that butcher's agreed with it.

Monopoly-the right or power, shared with no one else, to provide a service, trade in any thing, produce something, etc.(noun)
¡æIts' hard to monopoly because there are so many stores.

3. Essay Question
Yes. I have earned my own allowance. But it was not money. It was (culture) gift certificate. I earned it. So, I had about 100000won. Then my mom told me it's okay to buy some books I want no matter it's Korean or English. But, with my money. So, I bought 5 English books. It was not easy to choose Korean book and I wanted to buy "A diary of Wimpy Kid5,6, movie diary" , "How to steal a dog", "Hugo Cabret".
 I felt very happy when I earned my own allowance. Because I can buy anything I want.(Maybe except expansive things like smartphone.)I want to earn money and buy what I want with my money ,again.

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