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[B¹Ý] Ready, Freddy! #1 Tooth Trouble

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  • 2012-08-27 21:07
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ÃÊ3 Brian

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  • 2012-08-28 19:10
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Áö±Ýµµ 3ÇгâÀε¥ ÀÌÁ¤µµ¸é³Ñ ÈǸ¢Çѵ¥¿ä!!
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  • 2012-08-29 11:50
3ÇгâÀÇ ±ÛÀÚ°¡ ¾ÆÁÖ Á¤°¥Çϰí À̻۰ɿä.
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  • 2012-08-29 22:47
It's my pleasure to meet you Brian!! as a ºÎ»ê»ç¶÷ ¤»¤».
I live in ÇØ¿î´ë. Where do you live?
Anyways, your work seems very good and shows that you've put much effort!
Fantastic work and keep it up!!!
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  • 2012-08-27 15:14
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Hi~  I'm Gong Gyeong Bin.

I'm in fifth grade.

I live in ±¤¾ç. 

I like űǵµ. 

Nice to meet you~

 

 

 

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  • 2012-08-28 07:09
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  • 2012-08-29 11:52
¿ì¿Í. ¿¾³¯ Àú ´ëÇÐ ±â¼÷»ç ¼±¹è¾ð´Ï°¡ ±¤¾çºÐÀ̴̼µ¥...
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  • 2012-08-29 22:40
Hi Prince! It's great to see you!
I can see that you got the main points of the book and you understood the book well.
But generally, your work is short... I'm pretty sure that you are good enough to write more and that writing more will help you improving your English!
Nice work and let's work harder!!!
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  • 2012-08-27 13:17
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Eric(4Çгâ)

 

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¿ì¸® ¸ðµÎ È­ÀÌÆÃÇØ¿ä!!

 

 

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  • 2012-08-27 16:35
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  • 2012-08-28 07:13
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  • 2012-08-29 22:35
Great job!!
And it is pretty impressive that you chew gum to lose your tooth.
Your answers are exactly what I expected but by writing a little bit longer, you will be able to improve the quality of your answers very much!!
Wonderful work!!!
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  • 2012-08-27 08:35
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  • 2012-08-27 10:28
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  • 2012-08-27 16:32
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  • 2012-08-27 17:39
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  • 2012-08-28 07:15
6Çг⠾ð´Ï°¡ ÀÖÀ¸´Ï µçµçÇѵ¥¿ä ~~.
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  • 2012-08-29 11:53
6Çг⠴©³ª¶ó ±×·±Áö ¹º°¡ Æ÷½º°¡~~!!

±×¸²¸¸ ºÁµµ Á¦ ¾î¸±Àû »ý°¢ÀÌ ³ª¸é¼­ ½½¸ç½Ã ¹Ì¼Ò°¡ Áö¾îÁö³×¿ä.
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  • 2012-08-29 22:31
Fantastic work!!!
I could agree with your way to pull out your tooth because I used to use that method too.
Your diligent work definitely shows your eagerness and effort put in this assignment and I appreciate it!!!
Nicely done and keep it up!!!
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  • 2012-08-27 00:42
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5Çгâ Sally ¸¾ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

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  • 2012-08-27 09:06
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  • 2012-08-27 10:36
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  • 2012-08-29 22:27
Nice work!!
I can see that you've put effort on this assignment but if you can answer a little bit longer next time, it would be much better!
I appreciate that you got the main ideas of the book and the question.
And just a little thing, try to write neatly because neat writing makes both writer and reader!!
Keep it up!!
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  • 2012-08-26 23:42
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3Çгâ Michael ¸¾ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

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´ÙÀ½¿¡´Â °°ÀÌ ¿Ã¸®¸é¼­ Michael¿¡°Ô ±ÛÀ» ¾²µµ·Ï ÇϰڽÀ´Ï´Ù.

 

 

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  • 2012-08-27 08:42
3Çг⠱۾¾Ã¼ ¾Æ´Ñµí ...Å­Á÷ Å­Á÷ ÇѰÍÀÌ ²À Çʱâü °°¾Æ º¸ÀÌ´Â µ¥¿ä
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  • 2012-08-27 10:39
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  • 2012-08-29 22:24
Well done Michael!
You've put a little bit of your emotion in your answers for reading comprehension questions and I think it's a pretty good idea!
In my opinion, Freddy did not want to be a only one who hasn't lose tooth. It probably made him feel isolated from others. I think that was the reason Freddy tried to lose his tooth so badly.
Great job and keep it up!!
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  • 2012-08-26 23:06
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Hi

My name is Irene .Nice to meet you.

I'm 12 years old . My favorite subject  is art and p.e ! (especially I like dodge ball game)

I have hate subject too . It was music and social .

Do you know °­³²½ºÅ¸ÀÏ ? I like that music.

 

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  • 2012-08-27 08:45
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  • 2012-08-27 10:43
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  • 2012-08-27 17:43
Wow!! Looks like you have some solid drawing skills!! Those really help me tracking your way of losing tooth!! (and your explanations too!)
I trust you that you've made your own ´Ü¾îÀå but don't forget to study!
Fantastic work!!
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  • 2012-08-28 09:22
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  • 2012-08-26 22:06
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Hi~ I am the new member of this team.

My name is Kelly. I'm in third grade.

And my birthday is forth, November.

It's very late.

Nice to meet to you all.

Let's have a great time.

 

 

 

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  • 2012-08-27 17:40
Superb!!
Especially I'm impressed with your eagerness to learn vocabulary!! Great attitude!
Also I was surprised when you said you cut your tooth half with your teeth... that's pretty awesome...!!
But one thing, if you can make your answers for reading comprehension questions, quality of your work will improve a lot.
Keep it up!
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  • 2012-08-26 21:55
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  • 2012-08-27 17:36
Great quality as a first assignment!! Wonderful work Justin!!
This work proves that you have put much effort and I appreciate it.
But if you can make your answers longer, it would be perfect!!
Still, fantastic work and well done!
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  • 2012-08-26 00:15
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  • 2012-08-27 17:33
Fantastic work!
I was a little bit surprised when I read that you pull your tooth on your own... that's really brave..!!
Your work is great but to make your work perfect you could make your example sentences for vocabulary a little bit more specific.
Overall, wonderful job!!
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  • 2012-08-24 23:44
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Hello,I'm sally.

Nice to meet you!!!

I'm in 5th grade.

I like to read a book and draw a picture.

My favorite book is Harry Potter,I love it !!!

Thank you for the mission,bye!!!

 

 

 

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  • 2012-08-22 22:34
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  • 2012-08-27 17:23
Great work!
You showed eagerness as a new leader of the class and I appreciate it.
Keep that good and industrious attitude!!!
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  • 2012-08-29 22:45
I'm sorry ÈÖÀ±. I forgot something again... Please forgive me...
Thank you so much for helping me making good questions and also for leading "Best" group very well as a great leader!!
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  • 2012-08-22 14:15
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Hello~

 I'm Brian.

 I am very exited to be in B group and I'm in third grade.

I'll do my best.

I hope It will be fun.

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  • 2012-08-21 22:27
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Hi!! I'm Delphie¡Ü¥ø¡Ü

I'm in B group and I'm in 3rd grade.

Nice to meet all of you guys in computer!!!

I'm thrilled to do this!

Yeah!

Okay, a lot of chatterin'?

Sorry!

I haven't read the book yet.

But I think this is a rather familiar story.

Anyway,thanks for the misson!

BYE!

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  • 2012-08-27 09:04
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  • 2012-08-27 17:26
Great job Delphie!!
This work shows that you've put a lot of effort on this assignment.
But next time try to write a little bit more because writing more will improve your writing skill very much!
Still, wonderful job and keep it up!
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  • 2012-08-21 09:21
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Hello!

I am Frieda.^¤²^

I'm the only one who was 6th grade in B group.

You're swim for school swimteam?!

Wow!! I like to swim too!O.O¤»

 

I didn't read a book yet.

I want to read right now~

I think it will be very fun.¡Ù.¡Ú

 

Thanks for good mission.

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  • 2012-08-20 23:19
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Hi~!

Alex~ I'm  HY(HWI YOON)ÈÖÀ±

I've been waitting for your first Ready Freddy mission.

because it is my first HY's qustion too!!^^¤»¤»

 

I got surprised when you said you swim for your school swimteam.^^

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!

I play belly dance~~!!

Now a days I'm learning ½ÎÀÌÀÇ '°­³²½ºÅ¸ÀÏ'

Do you like it?? hahaha^^

 

Thank you for the wonderful mission Alex~~!!

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  • 2012-08-20 23:13
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