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  • 2013-01-28 19:12
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  • 2012-08-11 15:01
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4Çгâ EugeneÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

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  • 2012-08-03 11:16
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  • 2012-08-01 08:57
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  • 2012-07-31 21:54
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  • 2012-07-31 23:14
¼£·ÔÀº ¹éÀÛ¿¡°Ô ¿ôÀ» ÀÏÀÌ ¾ø¾úÀ»°Å¶ó »ý°¢Ç߳׿ä. ÀÏ»óÀÌ ´Ã ¾Æ¹«·± º¯ÇÔ¾øÀÌ ±×Àú ±×·¯¸é ¿ì¿ïÇØÁú ¼öµµ ÀÖ°ÚÁö¿ä. ÀßÇß½À´Ï´Ù. ^^
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  • 2012-07-30 23:04
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ÃÊ 6 Á¤À¯¼®ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

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  • 2012-07-31 23:10
¿©¸§¸¸ µÇ¸é ¹«¼­¿î ¿µÈ­ Æ÷½ºÅÍ ¶§¹®¿¡ ¼ÒÇÇ´Â ¹«Ã´ ºÒÆíÇØ Çϴµ¥,,,,
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  • 2012-07-30 19:23
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  • 2012-07-31 22:38
Superb!
I used to be afraid of ghosts and darkness when I was a little kid. Fortunately, as an 18 year old boy, I am not afraid of ghosts because I don't believe in spiritual existence and even enjoy darkness because I feel really comfortable when my surrounding is really quiet. But I still hate bugs.
I like your answer for your own question. It's really logical and creative. I think it's elaborate enough to be the real reason of sadness of Count von Ratoff.
Excellent work as always and thank you for making very creative and helpful questions every time.
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  • 2012-07-30 07:58
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  • 2012-07-30 22:33
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  • 2012-07-31 22:21
Excellent work!!!
Including you, a lot of people said that they hate bugs. So do I, and I can totally understand you even though you specifically said you hate spiders. I think many people in this world don't like bugs including insects, so I think it is very reasonable to say that we (people who hate bugs) all are "normal," not cowards ¤»¤».
With your answer for the last question, I am impressed that you mentioned that Count von Ratoff doesn't have a "family." As I am living alone right now, I got pretty sentimental by reading your idea.
I am very sure that you put much effort on this work and that you will continue to do so!
Great job!
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  • 2012-07-30 01:36
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ÃÊ5 GraceÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

 

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  • 2012-07-30 22:43
°üÀý¿° °É·Á ³¯ ¼ö ¾ø´Â ¹ÚÁã ¹éÀÛÀ̶ó,,,, Âü ¾ÈµÆ³×¿ä. ³ªÀ̰¡ ¸¹¾Æ¼­ ±×·±°¡? ¿äÁòÀº ³ªÀÌ¿Í Å©°Ô »ó°ü¾øÀÌ ·ù¸¶Æ¼½º °üÀý¿°À¸·Î °í»ýÇÒ ¼öµµ ÀÖ´Ù°í ÇÏ´õ¶ó±¸¿ä. ±×·± ¸» µéÀ¸¸é Àúµµ ½½¸ç¼­ °ÆÁ¤½º·´±âµµ ÇØ¿ä. ¤¾¤¾ ¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÀßÇß½À´Ï´Ù. ^^
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  • 2012-07-31 22:10
Great work!
I think it's very realistic and creative to say that Count von Ratoff has arthritis, and I enjoyed your answer. Also, I can totally agree with your answer for the last question because I don't like bugs either.
Overall, I can see you put a lot of effort on this assignment. I am sure that you will continue this superb work! Goob job and keep it up!
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  • 2012-07-29 23:10
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  • 2012-07-30 00:48
Excellent work!
I had been stung by a bee when I was like seven years old.
I was playing with my friends in kindergarden playground, and when I got stung, it was really painful...
Fortunately that bee was not a big one like a wasp so I'm alive now ¤»¤».
All of your answers are great and I appreciate your great effort!
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  • 2012-07-30 02:00
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  • 2012-07-30 22:52
¹úÀÌ ±×·¸°Ô ¸ô·Á µé¾ú´Ù´Â °É º¸´Ï ÈÖÀ±ÀÌ ÇÑÅ×¼­ ´ÞÄÞÇÑ ÇâÀÌ ³µ³ª º»µ¥¿ä? ^^
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  • 2012-07-29 23:02
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  • 2012-07-30 00:39
Outstanding work!
I wonder why you wake up at least once. Do you feel too much stress? I'm a little bit worried.
You know, health is the most important thing!
Other answers are very good, and I can see that you put a lot of effort on this assignment!
But you can improve a lot by writing a little bit more!
Great job on this assignment and keep it up!
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  • 2012-07-30 02:07
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  • 2012-07-30 23:00
¾îµÓ°í Á¶¿ëÇÑ ¹ã¿¡ È¥ÀÚ ±ú¾îÀÖÀ¸¸é ¹«¼­¿î ±âºÐÀÌ µå³ªºÁ¿ä. ±×·² ¶© ÀáÀÌ È® ´Þ¾Æ³ª Á» ±«·Ó±âµµ ÇÏ´øµ¥ ¸»ÀÌÁö¿ä. Áß°£¿¡ Çѹøµµ ±úÁö¾Ê°í Ç« Àß ÀÚ±æ Àúµµ ´Ã ¹Ù¶õ´ä´Ï´Ù. ^^ ¿­½ÉÈ÷ ÀßÇ߳׿ä.
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  • 2012-07-29 13:37
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  • 2012-07-29 14:14
Á×ÀÏ ¼ö ¾ø´Â ¹«¼­¿î Á»ºñ ¾ê±âµµ Àß ºÃ±¸¿ä,,
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  • 2012-07-29 23:19
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  • 2012-07-30 00:27
Nice work on this assignment!
Even though your picture is a little bit unclear, I can still read almost all and figure out that you put a great effort on this work!
Keep up this great quality!
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  • 2012-07-29 14:24
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  • 2012-07-30 00:18
Good work!
I can see you hurried up a little bit to go to your grandma's house, but your assignment is fine.
But next time, try to write a little bit more. Your answers would be much better if you do so!!
Keep up the good work and hope you had a good time with your cousins!
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  • 2012-07-30 00:11
Excellent work!!!
I really want to praise you for putting your question in your answers!
I think that is very effective way to communicate with you and share ideas!
I think they didn't flee and chase because it was in the airport with many people.
Probably they didn't want to make a mess with a conflict that they could solve by talking.
I also enjoyed your picture-like last answer. Especially I like the way you created "bloody scary."
I am also impressed with your effort to finish the last week's assignment!! Hope Jaewon sees that!
Again outstanding work and I am sure that you will continue this high-quality work!!
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  • 2012-07-30 00:00
I'm also a little bit afraid of bugs... so I can totally agree with you.
Each of your answers are just a perfect example.
Especially your answer to the Sophie's question makes me sentimental..
I also enjoyed your answers to the reading comprehension questions because those answers were exactly what I expected!
Wonderful job and keep this great quality!
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  • 2012-07-29 14:52
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  • 2012-07-29 23:50
I'm quite impressed by your enthusiasm for studying! And also your work!
But if you had read the questions a little bit more carefully, I think you could have improved your answers a lot more!!
Great job though and I appreciate your hard work!
Keep it up!
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Your "temporary" last work shows that you put much effort on this assignment!
But I think it could have been much better if you had written a little bit more.
Have a safe trip to China and hope you can come back soon!
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